He had use a propaganda technique in his document. It is Reward. He say that he is richer after joining the Crusade. A one thing that had move me in the Journal is when he describe the bloody Crusade and how cruel was he when he killed innocent people in the Crusade. I'll suggest him to look at his grammar again to make sure it's more accurate if I have to work with him. The one idea I'll give him is to add images to his journal. It will be more effective and cool!
He had use a propaganda technique in his document. It is Reward. He say that he is richer after joining the Crusade. A one thing that had move me in the Journal is when he describe the bloody Crusade and how cruel was he when he killed innocent people in the Crusade. I'll suggest him to look at his grammar again to make sure it's more accurate if I have to work with him. The one idea I'll give him is to add images to his journal. It will be more effective and cool!
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